I think the beginning is pretty good.
I suggest you to replace the subbass at 0:42 with some deep string-like instrument, or different, quieter bass and remove the reverb from it. You could also make the basses at 0:51 less trippy.
Also, the ending gets a little too messy because of the bassline.
You should learn how to mix it properly too.
That's what I think you could do better.
Track is nicely compossed but theres a problem with sound design.
That's all from me. I hope I gave some useful advice.
I think it's pretty good :)
Thing that (in my opinion) you should change is the drumline, it basicly should be faster (place kicks and snares in two times smaller distances) Also, I think the piano chords should be harmonized better (maybe you're placing too many different notes at once)
Thats all from me. I hope I gave some useful advice. :)
Thanks! I'll keep this in mind for future tracks :D
EDIT: The reason the piano wasn't harmonized as well, was because I had three different melodies with piano going at the same time :P
Track has cool vibe and melody, basses are ok.
There's nothing i can really complain about.
Great job! :)
Sounds generic but Pretty good :)
I think the vocals are just a bit "messy", The rest is ok.
Would be good if only it had some sorta background,
and be finished ;)
Good song! :) It has some good melodies and I really like The second half of this track.
Keep it up!
Thank you! ^.^
Great melody! :3
Thanks, man. :D
Nice song! The piano sound is great. :3
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :)
I think this track just needs more instruments because it's kinda empty.
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