Never gets old :3
I think the beginning is pretty good.
I suggest you to replace the subbass at 0:42 with some deep string-like instrument, or different, quieter bass and remove the reverb from it. You could also make the basses at 0:51 less trippy.
Also, the ending gets a little too messy because of the bassline.
You should learn how to mix it properly too.
That's what I think you could do better.
Track is nicely compossed but theres a problem with sound design.
That's all from me. I hope I gave some useful advice.
I think it's pretty good :)
Thing that (in my opinion) you should change is the drumline, it basicly should be faster (place kicks and snares in two times smaller distances) Also, I think the piano chords should be harmonized better (maybe you're placing too many different notes at once)
Thats all from me. I hope I gave some useful advice. :)
Thanks! I'll keep this in mind for future tracks :D
EDIT: The reason the piano wasn't harmonized as well, was because I had three different melodies with piano going at the same time :P
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